Tom comes home with a special formula to try out on his girlfriend. - My apologies for the first upload, Im new to this. This is in HTML format.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.67
- BE: 3.83
- Characters: 4.17
- Technical: 4.83
Mandy
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I enjoyed this very much. I love stories where the girl is controlled. When I rp I always play the sub and love to be controlled. Thank you for a great read. karenjenk@hotmail.com
PennyDreadful
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Refreshing to see a slow to develop tale that skirts on BE rather than...errr...drowns in it. Great drawn out descriptions (even if the BE wasn't what was actually described or developed exactly still gave that a 4). Desperation of female protagonist was palpable. Didn't expect it to end up quite where it did. More please!
MrHHH
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Not a whole lot of BE, but a great story overall!
ugh
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
That failed to suck, thanks for sharing it.
strand
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Excellent story. Well written and hot. Perhaps the best one I've read here. Thank you. Please continue this one.
Benji Dude
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
An excellent story but it finished too soon, would be great with a second part. Personally I like stories with a little more happenning in the BE departement but that is a minor complaint on a well written well paced story.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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