TheClause2007@yahoo.com
Different BE effects may boost eachother when combined.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.29
- BE: 2.86
- Characters: 2.86
- Technical: 2.43
anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
.
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
good start, but then it was wrapped up too fast, with not much description of what was going on not bad as a parody, not great as a straight story
Bill Pratt
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 2
Overall
Funny, but needs editing.
BE
They get big, but it just happens. No real description.
Characters
Not enough material to get a good read on the characters.
Technical
Given the number of spell checking tools available, there is no excuse for misspelled words. Otherwise you are getting up close to 4
Goofy tone, I like that, but agree with mr .: too little description and what description there is is confused
Wolf
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
I liked it but couldn't they get bigger?
Hivemind
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 1, Technical= 2
Spelling errors all over the place.
Is is REALLY so hard to use a spell checker. If you're a non-english native speaker, here's a thought: get an english native speaking BE fan to proofread your story...
MrHHH
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 1
Every time you don't use a spell checker, God kills a kitten.
Toymaker
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 1
"Shoulder height" isn't a measurement, and as it's already been pointed out, there's spelling errors aplenty.
It's an ineresting concept, but even as a parody, there was a lot more room for commentary on the subject, and the actual BE is rushed at best.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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