The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Clincal Trial
A new medical treatment has some serious side effects. Horror.
Average Scores:

Overall= 1, BE= 2, Characters= 1, Technical= 3

Disgusting. You're a disturbed individual.

The Almighty Popo
Overall= 1, BE= 3, Characters= 1, Technical= 3

That was very disturbing.

Overall= 1, BE= 2, Characters= 1, Technical= 3

You may want to start your own story archive. This one only belongs here on a small assortment of technicalities.

Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 2

Interesting idea. The science was uniquely more accurate than normal. The pacing and descriptions were rushed and hard to follow. cleaning it up and correcting the spelling would make this a better read.

Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 3

All I have to say is: Yuck!

Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 3

Ummmm. That was odd to say the least. But it was original. You do not see any type of multi-breast story here that often. So you gain points for originality. The problem witht his story comes from the fact that it is so incredibly screwed up. This story exebits a state of dominiation that transcends sexy, and goes into the scary zone. The story is well writen, but I did not enjoy the overal content.

Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

absolutely terrible.
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

Thank you for writing something worse than mine.
This was so over the top. I mean for a while it was cool then whoah it got too weird for even me.
Kind of like that movie "boxing helena".
Good stuff but you went too far

Elvis Interuptus
Overall= 2, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

I don't really LIKE erotic horror stories, but I must admit of the few I've read this is one of the best.

Which is why I gave it high marks in everything but enjoyment.

Probably could have been published in the "Hot Blood" series of erotic horror fantasy.


Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 2, Technical= 4

Apparently people here only rate stories on how much they can fap to them.

It's well-written and it's original, which is more than I can say for a majority of the stories here.

Good job.

Overall= 1, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

not my cup of tea but well written. chars could us a bit more felshing out (plz excuse the pun). I hope u dont get too discuraged with the feedback and keep writing

Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

Nicely done! Imaginative, interesting, and well written. Could have easily been much longer, with better descriptions, and character and situation development. Would have liked to see more BE description as that especially was fairly brief. Felt like you were riding the fence between horror and mere criminal insanity, but this was not a good thing and I would prefer it to be one way or the other. A very good job and I hope to see more from you.

Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1


Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 2, Technical= 3

Not bad not bad... Feell ike I read this before years ago....

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