Lara Croft is sent out to retrieve the Necklace of Rah. But it is another relic, in evil hands, that will cause Lara a world of problems.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.38
- BE: 3.13
- Characters: 2.75
- Technical: 2.75
DarkHeart
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 3
Not badly written, but seemed extremely superficial even for the setting used. Try to put a bit more detail into future stories.
Agent Dee
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
One of the BEST lara croft stories i have read. I always wanted to see lara find a artifact that would do that to her. keep up the good work my friend, you have what it takes.
Stretch
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Nicely written and with a "Busom Of Doom" feeling to it.
PeterBE
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 2
A fun, quick little read, but the quantity and extent of the typos and misspellings was mind-blowing.
Horseradish
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 2
With exception to some mis-spelled words, it was very well written. Clever and fun.
IceOwl
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 2
A decent short story, but as others are saying, lots of spelling problems.
DJ
Overall= 2, BE= 4, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Certainly a lot of BE, but even breasts that are three times the size of a temple are not big enough to eclipse the technical errors or the lack of characterizaion.
andrat2000
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 2
Just huge isn't much BE. And spelling errors 'en mass'. Even as a non english native speaker this was obvious. Just using a spell checker enough isn't enough. For example it won't find 'new' when you actually want to say 'knew'.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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