The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

A first-hand account of how four friends witness and experience mysterious changes that infect the world's population.
Average Scores:

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

I agree with The Eggman -- a fun, erotic read. I have to admit that if I'd gotten my hands on a wishing rock when I was the age of these characters, the world may well have ended up pretty much like this (except, perhaps, without the Amazonian and shemale transformations). Now that I'm older, of course, the world would still end up pretty much like this, but with a wider age range and with magically altered clothing.

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

A fun little romp, wouldn't mind seeing more.

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Well-written, with a minimum of dumb teenage stereotypes

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 2

A really good story. The use of quotation marks is highly suggested though! ;)

Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 2

Decent, though I feel very bad for the protagonists when they run out of food to scavenge, fuel for their SUVs, and more. On the other hand, perhaps the deus ex roommate who randomly wandered away at the end will come back to fix things.

Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

I liked it.
Fun stuff.
The healing factor should cover food, shelter, etc.
Interesting society should devolop, though.
Good device.

Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

Am I the only one that dislikes transgender or transformation?

The Eggman
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Absolutely loved this one. The whole premise of a world with nothing but hormone-crazed, inhibition-bereft, breast-expanding, penis-growing, patriarchal-society-upheaving teenagers was REALLY hot. My only complaint was how narrow the scope of the story was at the end - there could have been a lot more description of the effect of every person in the world being female save for reproductive genitalia. Also, I wasn't crazy about the other main male character leaving never to return (at least in the context of the story). Other than that, this was a good read, and IMO, very erotic.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Loved it!

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