The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

stevebearchive
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Nick is unfortunately successful at creating the perfect woman.
Average Scores:

fox
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

nice

brit
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 1, Technical= 3

A little to much deux ex machina for my tastes.

MrHHH
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

Yuck. Transgender.

Mahatma Ghandi
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

It was clearly labeled...

DarkHeart
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 2

Er, that's it? And no, I'm not looking for literature here, but I am looking for stories.

Benji Dude
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 3

Short and sweet, could have done with more discription of the transformations but I don't think I've enjoyed a story that much in a long while.

neo
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Nice.

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