The Overflowing Bra

Thank you for being honest about the tags.

I really appreciate it after seeing some of the other stories on the site.

The flow of the story is excellent.

This story has a wonderful narrative voice which makes it a huge standout in the annals of BE. The author cleverly doesn't reveal every detail; with a little skill he explains less, yet achieves more impact than most stories on every level. The character dynamics are just as believable as they need to be and the tension ratchets up beautifully. The 46 pages just fly by.
My qualms are that I would like to have had a slightly better idea of what Brenda looks like at the end and I wasn't sold on the mugged and beaten climax that resolves the desperate tension. I would have preferred a climax that the characters arrived at on their own without a chance happening to resolve complicated emotional issues for them.
But that doesn't mean that this story isn't a classic. I, admittedly, am often drawn to more extreme growth stories but Hunter S. Creek knows how to use words, especially in dialogue, to build up the reader's excitement.
I also admire stories that actually force their characters to deal with life-changing transformations instead of giving them an easy out (ex. boobs go back to normal size after our heroin takes off the magic ring).
And, finally, I admire that the author took the story seriously. Not *too* seriously, but just seriously enough to write characters that the reader cares about. There's nothing like some dramatic tension between two would-be lovers to drive a story forward. Our suspense over Mark's unrealized affection for Brenda locks dramatically in step with our anticipation over Brenda's growth. It's great storytelling and I'd like to read more of its kind.
I'm not in love with high school sweetheart stories, MG stories, stories with affected writing style or stories that keep growth *just* within realistic limits but this story managed to be all four and I still thought it was great.

I love this story.  It has to be the single best BE story I have read.  I would love to see this story turned into a comic by Bust Artist.

Irregular verbs can be difficult sometimes: Lie lied; lie lay. Watch out.
Apart from that a great story!

I've been reading these silly BE stories for a while now and this is one of the oldest I can remember. After reading so many, there has to be a reason this story stayed in my head, and this is it.
This is my absolute favorite BE/GTS story ever. I could go on and on about why but I'm sure all the points have already been made. I do want to say that this was the first BE/GTS story that I read and realized was created by an actual writer. It goes so far beyond what the basis is for the genre.
Character development is superb. Point blank and period. The concept of role reversal is amazing, due in no small part to the way the shifting intellects were portrayed. And the trauma. That sealed it for me. Heartbreak belongs in stories like these. It gives a story involving a miracle-grow drug/cum combination a few shades of reality. 
And it was classy. There's nothing harder than writing interesting sex scenes. This story didn't have the best of those scenes that I have ever read (probably the only bad thing I can say about this story) but it was an admirable effort. It's almost as if this could be called PG-13. No foul language and subtle explicit description. However, that adds to the story considering the ages of the characters.
Last thing I have to say is that when I consider my favorite reads of any genre, this story is among them. The best BE/GTS/romance story ever. And I'll even sign this rating to drive the point home.
Thanks for experience,
- gts dreamer

Easily one of my favorite stories ever.  Ever.  Gets a little long/wordy at times, but that's more than made up for by the great action and descriptive scenes.  

If there were 6's I'd have used those. Simply incredible.

Greatest (BE) story I have ever read

amazing!
one of the best erotic stories i've ever read.  Lauren is such an appealing character.  Your descriptions of their awkward kid-like courtship make the pay-off that much better.  You really captured the excitement of young love here, and that is an exceptional feat in a world where 'character' development usually just means something, well, more to do with big boobs and less to do with a person's character. ;)  
This story transcends the BE/GTS genres.  3 Cheers for HSC!!

This was a great story overall!

One of the best be/gts stories of all time.

I loved the story.  I'm not too into giantess stories but this one was an exception due to the power of its descriptions.  I'd have preferred it if the protagonist somehow caught up to her or something though.  I couldn't help but feel that he must feel pretty damn inadequate next to her.

This is by far the best, most wonderfully erotic story that I have read in a long, long time. Thanks to Hunter and to AlexG also. 

I enjoyed it very much.  Will there be a sequel?

Wow!  Great, great story!  Did not want it to end.  Wonderful characters and well written- an easy formula but a rare find.    

Best story i have read for a long time. Excellent work

I've never posted before, but I had to for this story: Thank you. Please...again. Your characterization was to the point and enjoyable, and gave a great feeling of teenage anticipation and angst.

Well, HSC - I have always been a big fan of your work but I can honestly say that this is probably by a long way, you best work to date. Indeed probably the best story of its type that I can remember reading, certainly.
I should say that I'm not really a fan of the retrospective narrator style generally you just managed to get it to work for you - the eloquent touches of hind sight made it integral to the story. Not to mention the sheer depth of character and so on.
The whole messing with puberty thing was a nice angle, certainly and Brenda's motivations well thought out. Perhaps my only reservation - if it could be called that, is the perhaps overly easy acceptance of her growth.
Our lead may have been a bit slow on the uptake but it's quite suprising that no one noticed it at her boarding school. Especially given her acquiring great deals of medecine - that presumably would have the same effect on other girls (albeit in lesser quantities). I can of course appreciate that a rival or even rivals would have detracted and diluted the thrust of the story - which is why it's more of a nitpick than a problem.
But I mean with that angle and Laurie's inherited growth spurt... well you have - should you desire and indeed I'm sure there will be much clamouring beyond mine - plenty of material to work with.
Once again congratulations on writing one of the best FMG/BE works I've ever read.

Absolutely loved this story. I am a big fan of Hunter's and always look forward to a new work. I especially enjoyed the long process of growth as opposed to the rapid or instant transformation. This allows the reader to enjoy the results almost as muh as the characters.   

This may actually be the best BE story I've read.  I've read many.  

Hunter, this is one of the best such stories I have ever read - if not THE best. Well-drawn characters, subtle romance, expertly-detailed growth scenes. Seriously, well done. Now I want the Hollywood adaptation!

I applaud this story, its a fantastic piece of fiction, i am not really into gts stories so much but your writing style was definately more than enough to compensate for that, i look forward to more (spelling error though "chicken pocks" is pox, not that i care just in case it you like to get stuff like that right.

Hunter S Creek has a new story up at the overflowing bra story site. And I have to say Hunter it is great I loved it. I appreciate your character development and that its not just growth and sex. Cause you come to relate with the characters. There were times when I was sitting reading the story that I found myself sayin "what the hell are you doing write back to her" to the main character. And even though the sexual scenes were very subtle the excellent description made them far better than any story with just out and out sex.
I also like your style of not going completely unbeleivable in size and keeping the growth in the realm of reality. So keep up the good work I cant wait for your next one but seeing as how long is one was and your next will be just the same it probably will take a long time.But dont rush your next story if the next is as well put together and developed as this one was it will be worth the wait. Cause stories that are well developed like yours come along only everyonce and awhile, but I can find crap that is just sex and growth anywhere.
I suggest this story for anyone to read. It is long almost 46 pages it is some what slower than other stories because it has character development and takes place over 2 years. But I recommend it strongly. 

what an amazing story, thank you!

Brilliant story - really enjoyed it. Thanks. 

Amazingly well written!

Amazing, a well written, believable story with no spelling mistakes. This is with nearly 50 pages of text too!
Bloody well done

As always Hunter, you've done some great work. The attention to detail, the characters, and everything else in this were wonderfully made. I look forward to anything else you work out in the future!

Great stuff. Really great stuff! Very well written, and very very hot.

Absolutely the best story ive ever read off this website, the benchmark for how BE writing should be, I applaud you.

This is easily the best story that I have ever read at this site.  It all seemed so natural, I loved every minute of the story.

One of the best Be i have ever read,

The 'average' scores say it all. The BE isn't the main focus of the story, but unlike some other well-written works that try to focus on the technical/narrative aspects, it doesn't suffer heavily. I don't give it a great score simply because it honestly feels a touch rushed for the ending.
Characters and technical qualities are superb - only one or two typos in the entire work, if I remember correctly. The flow is very good, though at times the story will lag for a bit. Still, considering the length of the work, it's not enough of an issue. The characters feel *very* real, for the most part.
Very good story - I've always liked your work, HSC. This didn't let me down.

It's always a pleasure to read a well developed, well written, erotic story, and this is just that.

Possibly the best fmg story EVER!  The characters were interesting, the story was gripping, and the growth was perfect...