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A couple unsuspecting women find out the unique way an online dating service enforces accuracy in the physical and mental descriptions of its members. They'd better like who they were pretending to be.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.33
- BE: 4.00
- Characters: 3.67
- Technical: 3.00
Rhnea
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 1
I very much agree, Tracy Chu's mouth is way too big and always shows her gum!Roxanne Tong is a lot beettr, deserved to be place at least among Top3!Carat Cheung looks not bad indeed but a bit not too "decent" type.
nobody
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
This is a great story (I think I've read it somewhere before although it wasn't as extensive then.) The characters' reactions to the mind and body changing are pretty cool. For any fan of domination type fantasies, it's very sweet.
I question the need to present this story in PDF format. There's no images, no special fonts, no hyperlinks, in general, there's none of the things that would normally make a story more appropriate for PDF rather than just raw text.
DarkHeart
Overall= 1, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
It was well written, but for some reason I just couldn't get into the story.
Joey
Overall= 1, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Could not read it because the format is not supported by my machine. Acrobat keeps crashing on me.
Corsetted
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I liked it a lot - found reading it and imagining more worked very well for me.
bagpuss
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
another excellent read but where is part 2?
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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