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When Maria has to fire one of her staff for misusing office resources, she has no way of knowing the power the young man has newly received. Her life, and her body, is about to change.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.33
- BE: 4.67
- Characters: 4.33
- Technical: 4.67
Corsetted
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I quite enjoyed the heat and the idea of telling it from the affectee's point of view. It would be cool to find out more about what might happen next, or a next victim.
Shaynringan
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Long story, but varied enough to keep my attention the entire time. Very intense read, I encourage you to keep up the good work!
Bagpuss
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Excellent Story. Sequel or more please?
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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