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The Overflowing Bra

Ready Art
Growth Lab 6
BE Comic, with GTS. Growth Lab 6, 59 pages long. It's Prom night and Naomi 
is back in town. This is the complete story with high res art. (Parts 1-10 
included) Enjoy!
Average Scores:

Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 2, Technical= 4

Well that was pretty ridiculous.

Why Ate Urp
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Nice to see a graphic format story with a plot and characters that don't have deformed genitals, rat or horse faces, and tits that look like rotting sacks of grapefruit.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

This artist is really working and improving. If you check out the website you can see that the growth sequences are getting more varied. I found the male growth to be particularly well done. One thing that is a bit difficult is the number of characters, and how to differentiate them. Particularly when there's no clear sense of scale - who's what size - it's hard to tell a lot of them apart.

There's no real plot, just an excuse for the growth, really, and that's okay, but it might be something for the artist to work on in the next production.

All in all this is an awesome, awesome set of pics. The artist can be proud.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

Definitely a great improvement both in the technical art quality and the variation in the growth. A slightly better plot and better ways of telling the different chars apart would be great, but I enjoyed this much more than the previous posts.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

this was good be

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I agree with Why Ate Urp. Also great details on the CB! The detail on the clothing when its being torn is awesome!

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