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A young girl named Gwen stumbles upon some little people in the forest. They turn out to be magic, and give her a big helping hand. Soon, everything starts to seem little.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.40
- BE: 4.20
- Characters: 4.20
- Technical: 4.80
anonymous
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Imaginative, lighthearted, rather well-written. Keep up the good work!
Grayface
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I liked and hope to read the rest soon.
brianm
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Very nice story. A lot of fun.
Looking forward to reading more. :-)
Kheben
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Alright, I hope you read this, cauz you need to hear it - KEEP WRITING. Although I won't say this is the best story ever, you definitely have the proper elements for a very good one. The way you described the girl growing (and her feeling it) was superb. You also mixed in everything I love in these stories - BE, Butt/Hip Growth, and Lactation. GTS I'm not as much into (especially when they get into the realm of abnormal), but it was still a good read.
I definitely look forward to any other stories you write. Hell, if you feel like discussing/bullshitting BE or whatnot, send me an email at Kheben@Aol.com
(I'm gonna post this up on both stories for the sake of giving you the rating and whatnot.)
specs000
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
i really like the story and can't wait for the next one. i would like to see kesley get pregnant. But that is a suggestion, no matter what you wright in the third one it will be great and can't wait to read it.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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