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His new fiancee knows his obsession for big breasts, and is all too happy to become his fantsy girl. But to what lengths will she go?
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.50
- BE: 4.33
- Characters: 4.00
- Technical: 4.75
Dr. G
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Expertly done as usual. Though the shrinking is by far the best part, I find it odd that Greaps made it a quick shrink. Slow shrinking is always the best and most sensual way to go. Other than that, fantastic themes and execution.
xblade0
Overall= 2, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
This story is, in my opinion, the most disturbing I have read to date. It started off fine, with great sex scenes and believable characters and settings, but as the "heroine" turned insane near the end, her character started to mimic the personality of a mother having an affair with her child. Plus, the fact that the "hero" had an extreme inferiority complex was creepy and the magic doll scene was quite out of place and contradictory to the label. If you cut down on the magic and personality disorders, this would be a superior piece of writing.
Roadrunner
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
I enjoyed the story. I thought the writing style was excellent and the conversations very erotic, especially the scene where he is trying to convince her to stop growing and she is pretending to listen while driving him nuts. I am also not a fan of the shrinking/gts theme, but that is personal taste. I thought the pce was excellent. the only thing I would have like to see more of actually describing the BE and going through it more. She has expandables and we did not get the treat of reading about her fill ups and how she was getting bigger and bigger etc!
deux_anges
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
The story started off really well, likeable characters, good pace, slow enough to generate plenty of anticipation but fast enough to keep the story flowing.
BUT, personally speaking, I'm not a big fan of giantess/shrinking so didn't like the ending. Also prefer it when both parties are concensual rather than one side suffering a nasty surprise.
How about writing an alternative ending where the ritual with the doll makes her grow even bigger?
not bad
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Good story, nice change of pace from the usual crap here.
Insanity
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Awesome. I've always been a big fan of your work.
Kowalski
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Greapos! You're the best. Great to read something new from you. I love "Eclipsed" also. This new story is one of the best I've ever read - the quality of the prose is pitch perfect, vivid, economical, sexy, detailed without bogging down.
DarkHeart
Overall= 1, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Okay, that was just disturbing, much for the same reason as deux_anges.
Stretch
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Another great story Greapos, though a bit more "creepy" compared to your other ones. I enjoyed it.
Bob Santh
Overall= 1, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
While well written, the doll concept turned me off of the story. It was enjoyable up to the point where the magic entered, but after that, it lost any value. If the process had been reversed, for a happier ending of sorts, it would have been better.
Babelover
Overall= 3, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
The woman baby-talks too much.
?Ike
Overall= 3, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
That was a great story but when he was shrunk only one feeling came over me spooked, overall great descriptions the jack off part in front of his bride i did not like.
Overall great work i wish i could write like that.
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