The Overflowing Bra

Good story, though it was hard to follow at times due to the layout and hard-to-read text.
The BE could have used a bit more description, though.

I don't know what the last to guys are smoking but keep it away from me. Amazing work GammaRai. Top notch!!! Also over a thousand downloads and only 2 shitty responses?? WTF!!!??????

This artist just keeps getting better. If you compare this story to the ones posted previously, you'll see many areas of improvement. As before, the main areas that could still use some work are differentiation of women - especially the "enhanced" ones - and a more consistent use of backgrounds.  The story, as before, is minimal, but I can tell that the artist is really trying.
Unfortunately, I think the artist is not planning well for the words in a panel. At the very least it seems that they're getting out of control.  I would suggest writing a full script beforehand, along with the storyboards. You may find that you need to divide up some of the longer speeches more.  (This may also relate to the difficulties with backgrounds.)
Very fun story.

Pretty Good

I don't know what's wrong with me, I just don't find incest and molestation erotic. I wish the rating had some warning on this.

Wowsers. I need to read comics more!!I cant believe the previous comments. This was awesome. The art is something I have never seen before in style and color in this genre. and how do you get INCEST from a story about a troubled divorce kid making it with his older stepsister? Obviously the early comments are idiots that can't read, or only look at the frames with big tits in them. I saw myself as a young man trying to fit in and had some of the same idiots he deals with messing with me at the young age. I dont see too many "moral"  stories here and appreciate the human element interjected into what is usually a very lame "let's connect the  scenes to make some big tits" line of story. Jesus christ.if nothing else, the scene in the shower is worth a thousand jack offs. And is it true the author is a woman? Damn. Is she married, and if not, is she into BE dweebs like me?

I enjoyed this story a great deal, and the artist has definitely improved in many areas, the only drawback to me was the seemingly poor insertion of the text. Trying to follow what people were saying got a little tricky at times.
Please keep this up, I really enjoyed this story.

Rather good in general, certainly better artwork than average. I thought the opening dialogue between the dweebettes to be hilarious and realistic. It reminds me of some of my coworkers..