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The Overflowing Bra

Derob Jacobs
deejake@gmail.com
First Day
Dr. Philip James's first day at Bulwer Elevester University holds great promise for what the rest of his time there will be like.
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 Benji Dude
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 3 
A nice little start to a story, consistent level of quaility but lacking in direction I felt, maybe with the next part we'll see something statr to develop.
 dude
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1 
crap
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