Maternity clothing store of the future! Try on new fashion, experience how you'd really look preggers!
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.00
- BE: 2.33
- Characters: 2.33
- Technical: 3.00
Porkchop
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
WOW!! Great story! Ignore negative comments and just keep it up, you're doing fine!
Ugh
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
How can you tell a story is going to be a waste of time?
When the author can't manage English tenses.
Grammar aside, the tale itself would have to improve to get a 1, but that's the lowest rating allowed.
Do the world a favor, and get a copy of The Elements of Style.
deux_anges
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 3
The basic idea seems interesting and promisses a lot but somehow the actual product lacks focus. Maybe if it was only concentrated on the experiences of the lady customer, or only concentrated on the stories the shopkeeper had to tell.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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