Scientist husband returns home full of mischief and a mysterious canister!
Average Scores:
- Overall: 2.50
- BE: 2.50
- Characters: 2.50
- Technical: 2.75
Porkchop
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Give the man a break, its a decent story! Folks that criticize should simply try writing a story of their own!
ugh
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
I've read some crappy writing here, but this author is at the bottom of the outhouse pit. Get a copy of The Elements of Style.
Koldvenjenz
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Is it possible that we could get some helpful feedback around here? If people are trying to prevent any new stories from being written, they are doing exactly what is needed to achieve their goals. Shut up if you aren't tactful enough to post anything but flames. Negative opinions can be shared without insulting the people that are donating their time. Get a copy of How To Be A Human Being.
Benji Dude
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 3
A well written story, not exactly my thing (bellies and rubber women, if you like that kind of thing then make overall enjoyment a 3/4) but enjoyable enough to read through to the end, keep up the work.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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