cheviot@cheviotsplace.com
This is a re-release of a story previously titled "The Girls". Numerous spelling, grammar and punctuation have been corrected and several other reader concerns have been addressed. Enjoy.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.33
- BE: 4.33
- Characters: 4.33
- Technical: 4.33
Triss Morgan
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Pretty good story. Entertaining and well written. I still noticed a few grammatical mistakes and Lisa's and Michelles names where switched around a couple of times.
Overall, a good read. Thank you.
MunchWolf
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Woohoo, like the name switch
DarkHeart
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Pretty good story, if an amusing twist on an old late 80's movie... :)
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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