The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Amanda Liddle
Say My Name 2 (chapter six)
Average Scores:
 me
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 3 
Loved it.  Want more.  Need I say more?
 Benji Dude
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 3 
A nice addition, keep up the good work.
 Anonymous
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 3 
I've enjoyed the story so far and am looking forward to the next installment.
 L I C
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3 
Good extension to the original. I took notice of your comment at the end and left more feedback for the other longer part of the story. 
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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