The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Steve Palmer
With illustrations by Art Newman, a Steve Palmer story of a woman who becomes a model when her breasts start growing fast ... and faster. And they do not stop. HTML, unzip and click on the index.htm file.
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Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I feel silly saying this, but I feel like you wrote me. And I hate reading these stories and putting myself in the character's shoes (it's RandomX speaking, I've well established myself as a girl with people who can confirm this, not some weird guy!). From not wearing makeup, to being shy, to not having a clue how to dress, to being insanely self conscious and oblivious to people staring, to loving the attention (contradictory, I know), it really feels like you were watching me and wrote a story. Which is kinda creepy as I like to read these kinds of things without relating. But I loved this story regardless. :)

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Simply put, this is one of my all-time favorite stories!

not bad
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

welcome change from the flood of crap here lately

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Great stuff as always, but a little too long. Incorporation of pictures is great idea and helps the story along, although some of the pics are a bit small.

Jeff Goldblum
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Very well done. Your writing is top notch, and the inclusion of pictures that actually fit the story is a very nice touch.
Keep up the great work!

Dr Detroit
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Sarah meets Megga who envisions a twisted Dollywood. Brilliant. More please,soon!

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