The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

New Life
A young boy discovers his sexuality from the new kid at school, with unusual and fertile consequences!
Average Scores:

Overall= 1, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

A guy gets pregnant, multiple times....YEECHHHH.

Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 4

You have a straightfoward, easy to read writing style and I look foward to seeing other stories that DON'T involve gay erotica.

Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1


Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

Nothing good here. It's got holes I could push a small moon through. Rewrite and overhaul. The doctor is no doctor. Even for a fantasy story, this one is completely unfeasable. Take it down.

Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 3

I admit this story is a tad off the "Normal" fair here but with transformations and gender switchs,etc. I don't think the should be removed. Personally I kinda liked the fat,fucked, and happy fantasy

Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Great Work, maybe you schould post it over at

But I like your style and hope for some new stuff in the (near) future!


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