The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Ready Art
Opening Night Comic
BE Comic. 14 pages. Another Early work of mine. Watch as the two main characters battle it out by trying to absorb each others powers.
Average Scores:

Overall= 1, BE= 3, Characters= 1, Technical= 2

You say this is one of your early works and it shows. You later stuff shows much improvement in the drawings although the story and character development still needs much work.

Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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