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The Overflowing Bra

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The Industry
BE Comic. The Industry -  44 pages long. An early story of mine. Lots of BE and some GTS. Enjoy!
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 jack
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4 
nothing
 coder4freecode
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 1, Technical= 2 
This isn't a comic; it's a sketch of a comic.  While many BE stories have some issues with their plot, this comic has none.  That's because it has no plot.
After three years of learning to draw, I almost got to be this good.  I'm now a programmer, and I aspire to be a writer.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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