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The Overflowing Bra

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Growth Lab 5
BE Comic, with GTS. Growth Lab 5, is 10 pages long. Naomi returns to school to find out who the new Prom Queen is. The answer doesn't make her hapy, it makes her grow.
Average Scores:

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 1, Technical= 5

All was awesome although the characters were a bit similar.
I hope to find more of your art on overflowingbra and with the help of comment it will be better than the best

Overall= 3, BE= 5, Characters= 2, Technical= 2

There's too many parts for me to comment on them individually so I'm going to comment on the entire series here. Your artwork is really quite good, but your characters were almost clones of each other in appearance. My suggestion in the future is to cut down on the repetitive scenes of the woman getting blown up (it looks like you took the same pic and inserted slightly different dialog) as well as trying to show some more individuality into your chars. I lost track of each of them because they were so similar.

Hope to see more in the future.

Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 1, Technical= 3

I'm going to comment on the whole series here rather than individually too. The story flow isn't smooth and many of the scenes look the same to me. As a result, I can't rate the characters highly. They all threaten to get bigger or explode but somehow don't quite get there.
For technical quality, the drawings are good and I do like a some butt expansion. However, this is all let down by the poor story development.

Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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