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A remake of Noble Sword's story "Time Machine". Illustrated and converted to PDF as a Christmas gift from The Overflowing Bra to all of you.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.75
- BE: 4.50
- Characters: 4.50
- Technical: 4.50
deux_anges
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Loved the original, good pace with the storyline and I liked the characters and idea. The addition of illustrations is good in one sense, but I already had a mental picture in my mind from reading the original unillustrated version so the pictures weren't quite what I expected.
Phoenix
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
AWESOME!! Merry xmas too!
DarkHeart
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Very nicely done, in a way I regret missing it the first time, but to have a well written story combined with very nice pics was a wonderful holiday prezzie. :D
DD_Redshoes
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I am deeply impressed.
Gives a whole new slant on time travel and evolution, I like it.
The story certainly has alot of open ended plots for other stories that may be worth exploring. Especially in regards of what the two girls did after they got darted and found that within a week they had out grown their tops.
I am certainly looking forward to more of your adventures, just next time be a little more descriptive with characters and events.
DD_Redshoes
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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