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The Overflowing Bra

IowaGuy
Malleable Doll Kimiko
Kimiko Sorayama is a bitch. She's rich, she's hot, and she knows she's got it "goin' on". What she DOESN'T know is that her family comes from a long line of Geisha. One of her anscestors was so determined to make her Emporer happy, that she had a wizard cast a spell on her. The spell turned out to be a curse, and now, it affects EVERY female decendant. When someone says the secret magic word, the spell is activated, and Kimiko must do whatever she is told, no matter what! She becomes a living sex dream, capable of transforming in anyway that her master desires. A young male student, Yasuo Hirihito has learned Kimi's secret, and the word. What happens next? Find out, in Malliable Doll Kimiko!
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Harris
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
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Derrick
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
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Francis
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
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Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
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Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
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banditkings
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I love your doll story.What happen with part2? Is there a part 2?
cmdr_mark
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3

Story feels a bit rushed. I wouldn't mind a remake of it that lasted a whole day and went through a lot of transformations. I love the peaks into her mind where she tried to fight it.

andrat2000
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 3

too short.

DarkHeart
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

I agree, the story is well written, but way too short.

Benji Dude
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

Nothing to add really it's already been said, well written but too short.

Banditking
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

way to short.
vary good story line,can go any were with it, or her.
Any more like this one around?

UgUgUg
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Well written, interesting, and a good overall story. Too short, though.

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