The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Mister Grey
Something to Grow On
Two women, Lisa & Jennifer, meet at a bar & quickly decide to spend the night together. Things get interesting when they both discover they have secrets they want to share.
Average Scores:

Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 5

Normally I'm not into lesbianism, but this hot story was very well written. If the BE description was better and the characters better fleshed out, I would've enjoyed it more.

Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 3

The BE was okay, but you could definitely improve upon it. Sometimes I found it hard to tell who was who, and I think that was because you didn't explain them well enough in the start. But overall I enjoyed it well enough. One more thing: Use the actual word "and" instead of the symbol "&" (It can get kind if annoying).

Benji Dude
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 3

A pretty good story but like the person below me said, the characters were a little difficult to distinguish from time to time, other than that though nicely done.

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