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The Overflowing Bra

Mister Grey
Engorgio Robustus
A fanfic set in the Harry Potter world, Hermione Granger & Ginny Weasley decide to experiment with a book of spells Hermione stumbled upon.
Average Scores:
 jooe
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5 
Great story, love the hermaphrodite theme
 mr
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1 
boring
 ProfessorGrow
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4 
I enjoyed it! When do we get to see what she has planned for Ron?
 Very Free
Overall= 3, BE= 1, Characters= 2, Technical= 1 
Ok, I guess.  It might be a typographical error when the author misspells tongue once, but five or six times, he's a fucking idiot.  Make that a fucking dyslexic idiot.  Turn on the spell checker!  DUH.
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