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The Overflowing Bra

Mister Grey
Engorgio Robustus
A fanfic set in the Harry Potter world, Hermione Granger & Ginny Weasley decide to experiment with a book of spells Hermione stumbled upon.
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Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Great story, love the hermaphrodite theme

Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1


Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

I enjoyed it! When do we get to see what she has planned for Ron?

Very Free
Overall= 3, BE= 1, Characters= 2, Technical= 1

Ok, I guess. It might be a typographical error when the author misspells tongue once, but five or six times, he's a fucking idiot. Make that a fucking dyslexic idiot. Turn on the spell checker! DUH.

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