The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Tales of Insanity: The Spree
A scene involving a girl whose breasts grow in the middle of a crowded shopping mall.
Average Scores:

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 5

Nice short story. Your work is excellent as usual, though I do prefer a longer tale with more character development. And no, I'm not talking about the BE.

Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 5

As Daunte said, it was well written (if only more writers showed your attention to detail), yet it seemed a bit lacking.

lord fuzz
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Very nice, well written. Please keep writing
Thanks for this one.

Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 5

I'm left with a sense of dissappointment at the end of the story, yet certain aspect of this act blow me away. I guess mysteries are good, but please add the component of recognition so that the reader doesn't feel left out.

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 2, Technical= 3

A fun little story. Good description of the BE and the results. Keep up the good work.

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3

Quite a cute and enjoyable read thankyou.
The mind just wonders why the BE just started for no apparent reason.
Guess she was just a late bloomer I guess LOL


Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 4

Nicely affecting. I particularly enjoyed the uncontrolled pleasure, even when she was scared of it. Too short, not well developed really, but I liked the mystery even to the end.

Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Pretty good for a sketch -- not quite complete enough, though.

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BE Description (Detail, quantity, quality)
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Characters (Descriptions, likeability)
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Technical Quality (Writing style, grammar, etc.)
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