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A scientific experiment goes awry. But is that such a bad thing?
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.83
- BE: 3.17
- Characters: 4.50
- Technical: 4.33
Above Ground Pool
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Honestly, not bad news!...
DarkHeart
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Very well written story, the subject matter generally isn't up my alley, but you did make the characters, especially the main one, very realistic. Could work on your BE description though.
XXXecil
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Much like a Greapos story; but with a much happier ending. The B.E. needs a bit of work though. But it's a wonderful lactating sex-fest.
MrHHH
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I don't know why you deadpanned this story in the readme. It was fine the way it was, just focusing on one transformation.
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Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
senior
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Good overall, not too strong on the Breast Growth more focused on the lactation and shrink/growth. A very good story overall despite not being my personal preferences with the genre.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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