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The Overflowing Bra

The Superweapon Parts 1 to 3
 This package includes Part 3 of 'The Superweapon' series as well as the previous 2 parts. It's the shortest so far, but it may be made longer once part 4 is finished. Comments, suggestions and reviews are appreciated(Check bottom of Part 3 for instructions on how to get them to me).
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Benji Dude
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Overall all three parts were pretty good but I felt part three was lacking in the discriptions of BE. It does have a good ending, leaving things nice and open for another chapter, good work.

Overall= 4, BE= 1, Characters= 3, Technical= 5

Same as Banji Dude, but rated more appropriately.

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