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The Overflowing Bra

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Blessings and Curses Part 7
Exploration of Boobanas powers and the first initiate.The promised continuation. Still more to come... and feedback more than welcomed. Thanks!
Average Scores:

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

blessing and curses part 8 someday?

Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

curse the author for wasting the two minutes it took me to download and delete this

Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 2

Not very well done. And the pre-teen stuff is terrible.

Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 2

I like the series. This one was average but please keep going.

Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3

A few misspellings, but not nearly as bad technically as some. I disagree with the BAD review. This story has good aspects, but I think the scenes end right when they are getting most interesting. I would like to see better descriptions rather than more story threads. Any bad elements to the stories are a simple matter of editing and focusing the content. Keep writing!

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

was this a perfect story? No. But it's damn good, especially if you've been following since part 1. The English is great for a non-native speaker... the real loss seems to be idiomatic usage rather than any technical aspects. Some more BE description would be good, as well as a hint of payoff... where the story is headed. Right now, there are no links between the disparate storylines.
Overall, it was pretty good and I put in all 5s to counteract the asshat who voted 1s across the board.
Brother, this ain't a 1 story... save that for some real dreck. Lord knows there's enough.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Another worthy entry in this series, which really holds together for those of us who have been following it since part 1. By the way, contrary to one rater's comments, there is no "pre-teen" content. But the introduction of Rebecca's thirteen-year-old younger sister Roxanne was a neat idea - I'd be interested in more about the family dynamics of this genetically-gifted family.

One general issue raised by this part is, "how far can the blessings go before they cease to be blessings"? Francis' previous growth to near-She-Hulk size verges on the limits of what is (to my mind anyway) aesthetically-pleasing dimensions. Yet she grows even further when she recruits Roxanne. Likewise Rebecca is looking forward to further growth as she takes on more acolytes. But if characters keep on growing indefinitely as they bring in more recruits, they begin to move into gigantism realms that have heretofore been eschewed in story. In this context, note that "Boobana" has huge but not absurd J-cup (HHH) breasts, and her figure is taken as an ideal by Rebecca, whose body grows to mirror "Boobana's". But if Rebecca and the rest continue to grow, do they become better than their ideal and power-source, or somehow less? Finally, I'm curious how the power of Julia's charm will compare to that of the "Boobana" demon whenever they might come into contact and conflict. Julia's charm seems more benign than "Boobana", whose acolytes I suspect will ultimately come to grief. Likewise Julia's charm at face value seems less powerful than "Boobana", but I'd prefer if it turns out otherwise. - JBiltman

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

I love this series so far, I hope you are able to keep it going... Please?

Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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