The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Ed Miller
The Haunted House
Four teenagers are trapped in a Haunted House that mysteriously grants their desires 
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Benji Dude
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 3

It's a very good story but I felt as though it was a little long winded.

Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 3

man becoming a woman...isn't there enough of that crap already? I don't get any pleasure reading about that stuff. TG has it's own place on the web, not in a BE story.

Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

I don't have much to complain about here. I thought it was pretty well executed and reasonably well-written.

And, to the person who wrote the comment about not liking the content.. if it's not your thing, then don't read it, and don't rate it.

Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

An excellent story, but as previous reviewers noted, it's primarily a TG story with some elements of BE and other transformations. One thing that I liked about this story more than the rest of Ed Miller's work was that it had overt, direct male growth too. That said, the (female) characters were well-drawn and it was very readable. But this is basically a TG story.

Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Good story about a man becoming a woman. My comment is minor. This should be list as TG not Wierd. Of course I think OddWierd and I have a different meaning for the term weird than the rest of the world. But good story. Keep writing.

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