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The Overflowing Bra

Ed Miller
Master PC: Self Experimentation
So what would *you* do to yourself with the Master PC program? 

Ed finds the Master PC program in his email and uses it for whatever comes naturally. I'm sure you can guess what comes naturally.

Average Scores:

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 2, Technical= 4


Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

The ending, though somewhat predictable, was very delightful, raising my overall enjoyment by about 1.5. As per normal in these stories, BE description is a bit lacking, refering overly to cup size (although, when one has a computer interface, it's either going to be cup size, inches/cm, or a slider. The last has potential - but the series has already established that it's cup size. Sigh.)

I strongly suspect that a spell checker was used - but it didn't catch a couple instances where the misspelled word just happened to be another word.

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