Jelena already has big boobs, but something happens with her dildo which starts making her bigger.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.80
- BE: 3.80
- Characters: 3.20
- Technical: 3.40
banditkings
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
It's a good safe BE story. Try thinking outside the box. Like being stuck inside the bath tub, and can't turn the water off. Now that would be a BIG BE story!
oxomox
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
I have a pile of stories I've written for myself which I've never published. I only put 10 up today. They aren't perfect but I welcome feedback on improvements I can make to them.
DD_Redshoes
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 2
Not bad at all.
All I can say is get a few plot lines together and some character build and you will be away laughing with this one.
It certainly got me wet. LOL
DD_Redshoes
Breasts
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I really enjoyed this one. :)
I would like to see her get even bigger.
Nevr2much
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Just the way I love my BE stories. No pretense to be great literature, just great "strokers".
I hope you will have "Jelena Part 2". She deserves to achieve her fantasies. (And by proxy, ours.)
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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