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The Overflowing Bra

oxomox
Interview With Doctor
A woman explains to her new doctor how her boobs became as large as they have.
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 Kam
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5 
I loved it, but why is she speaking to a doctor if she is perfectly content?
 ??
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
One of the best i've read so far.
 oxomox
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3 
I have a pile of stories I've written for myself which I've never published.  I only put 10 up today.  They aren't perfect but I welcome feedback on improvements I can make to them. 
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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