The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Julie & Tammy
Julie and Tammy steal a chemical from their roommate and grow uncontrollably.
Average Scores:

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 2, Technical= 3

A good story, but some elements get a bit sidetracked. What happened to Jim? Does he ever return, or does he just cease to exist?

Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3

I have a pile of stories I've written for myself which I've never published. I only put 10 up today. They aren't perfect but I welcome feedback on improvements I can make to them.

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