The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Gunslinger
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Touch O' Magic, A
A leprechaun grants some wishes in this lovely tale of Irish magic and comely lasses.
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BB47
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Short and light.  Almost all completely off scene.  Over before it starts.  Cute and funny. 
Journeys End
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

This is one of the few stories i keep coming back to on this site. Normally i would ask to see a lot more lactation, but i really liked how you used it at the end. It was a nice surprise and just what i needed to get me hooked.

Well done

Sucker4Boobs
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

Man, this story was mad funny. Also, very vibrant descriptions in this story; you really know how to paint a good scene.

Grimes
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Though it isn't what one could call a pure 'smut-fest' the characters are charming and the description just enough to add to that charm. Wouldn't mind reading a sequal to this albeit it's darn near perfect as it is

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