lockabar2001@yahoo.com
A cheerleader steals her mother's BE pills, and has an uplifting experience!
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.75
- BE: 3.50
- Characters: 3.50
- Technical: 3.63
HeliumGirl
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Wow, my first low rating to a lighter-than-air breast inflation story. Only because it took so long to get to it. ;)
Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
elvis_interuptus
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Nothing special but an ok job and worth the time.
DarkHeart
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Not badly written, at least you didn't use too many overused cliches, however you should proofread your work a bit more.
Cmdr_Mark
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
A very cute little story. Thanks for uploading it.
Benji Dude
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
A nice story, well written but needs to be fine tuned a little, Good job keep it up!
Anonymous
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Anonymous
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Nothing special to really make it stand out, but it's a good story nonetheless. Great potential here for a sequel or branch-off story though.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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