Libby accidentally grows barn-sized.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.00
- BE: 4.00
- Characters: 3.22
- Technical: 3.22
IronicZ
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
LOVE THIS STORY!!! I have read many stories on this site and this one is in my "TOP 3." Great work!
Doctor X
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
This is one of my favorite BE stories.
b3
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
One of my favourites (It used to be at wren-spot, but I rescued it a while ago)
trick400
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 2
A little scrappy, could be improved, but a good job!
Stretch
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Good story. I like the details and descriptions.
DarkHeart
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 3
Not badly written, but it seemed very cliched and had very little substance.
Breasts
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Benji Dude
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Well written but was lacking.
Bejabbers
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 2
OK, so she drinks the milk, and gives water. How did the writer then make the leap that she would produce milk later? Or maybe I'm just thnking too much...:)
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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