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The Overflowing Bra

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Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3

This is one of my favorites I find myself always coming back to read it. It simple yet a lot of fun I love the size and how much she enjoys her growth those are always big pluses to me. There are a couple of mistakes in it but nothing serious and frankly when it comes to BE stories mistakes don't bother me that much since well all know what we're trying to do here lol.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 3

awesome story. the BE was amazing, although the grammar and spelling wasnt the best. im not gonna be 1 of those assholes that dont like a story cuz of bad grammar though :)

Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 1

I enjoyed it quite a bit. I really love helium-inflation BE (or other lighter-than-air gaseous inflation BE), so I gave it a 5 in that category. There's not a whole lot of character definition, but at least we have some motivations and tendencies, not just some cipher who's just there to have everything happen to her. But please, please... take more care in the technical areas.

Overall= 1, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 2

9vYO5n hi! hooli?

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 2, Technical= 3

Loved how big she got, and loved the descriptions on her growth. Good job. Wheres the sequel? :)

Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

Your spelling and grammar need alot of work, and while the premise was interesting, it wasn't enough to overcome the poor technical quality in your writing. In addition to the the grammar and spelling, the formating was horrible. Next time, please indent your paragraphs.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

A good story.
I enjoyed it. :)

Overall= 1, BE= 2, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

It leaves a lot of WHY questions...

Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

A decent quickie, but the author either needs to learn how to spell, or use spell check. Grammar is also atrocious.

Overall= 1, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 1

For the love of god, there's a feature built into the software that checks spelling AND grammar. Why doesn't anyone ever use it?

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

not bad interesting premise but grammar and spelling need a lot of work

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 2, Technical= 1

Eventhough the formatting made it hard to read, it was still a lot of fun.

Ben Collings
Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 2

Not the best story I've read but not the worst, spelling and grammar were a major problem. A very average story.

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