Sword and sorcery epic involving women trapped in a mysterious plant by an evil sorceress, plotting to cause chaos and... well... big boobs
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.27
- BE: 3.93
- Characters: 4.13
- Technical: 4.07
Ironman
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great Story indeed. But man where is the sequal. I hope you can write more about this erotic fairy tale story. Fore eample. What happens to the Virgin Princess, is the witch goi ng to get her revenge. How about Polli. Where has she gone. How about Lari, did she settle down. It would be great if you decided to write a continuation of this story as Woman nymph maker. Please write more of this story I'm your biggest fan.
Basil_jelly
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I've seen this one before but it was still fun to re-read.
bibgno
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Saw this one before too and liked it but never could find it again.
Rosa
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I am a fan of sword and sorcery stories above all others. I adore them. It's always a pleasure to find a new fantasy-genre story here or elsewhere that I enjoy, and they're all too rare.
This story was very good, and I hope you'll write yet more.
Yeppers
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Another classic revisited! The copy that was passed around on many websites had been mangled somehow. Glad to see it back in the saddle again.
fourshot
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Im not a fan of the old english dialog but the writing was consistent and I enjoyed the story.
opera63
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Worth reading! I'm looking forward to a continuation to find out how the wicked witch in her new form gets her revenge. Thank you!
deux_anges
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
chimale
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Good story. How about a woman nymph-maker or fairy-maker?
rudeypunk
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
A really fun story. I didn't like the olde english but I just could not put it away.
Pinto Bean
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 4
The BE aspect is a bit thin and I'm not sure about the faux Middle English dialog, but overall an enjoyable read.
Jrsob
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Very enjoyable, Hope there will be more on this story line...
bob
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
above average, loved the magical aspect
Aus
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
This is an old classic that was rescued from being buried. Unforunately the author never did a sequel. Too bad. There are a number of places that could have additional stories - the old witch, the virgin princess after being transformed, other people finding the plant, and what happens if someone made the plant in modern times.
Great story.
Aus
GaBE
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Good story overall. Author needs to flesh out the character discriptions a little more and it could do with fewer loose ends.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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