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The Overflowing Bra

David Johnson
The Gran Tetons Series - pt1-3
Rose discovers that the old soft-drink Chris has found has some...interesting side-effects. Soon, breasts are plumping up all over!

This is the first two episodes of the "Gran Tetons" series - "Rose Grows" and "Miss Chris" - somewhat rewritten and the long awaited third episode - "A Weighty Problem" - finally finished. With all new images! Unzip to directory and start with "Rosegrows.html"
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Nobody, really
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

A classic...EXPANDED. THe third part does some good exposition and sets up a hilarious fourth part! I can't wait for the next installment. And of course the first two parts are old favorites.

Diamond Mike
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

It's Great to See a continuation of this story! Keep up the good work! I'm looking forward to part 4.

Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Happy happy joy joy. I'm very glad to see this one continued.

Better than coke or pepsi.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Man, just when you thought some of the oldies would never get updated :-D

Great job! Write more!

Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

Quite simply it is fantastic.
Perhaps the ending of the trilogy was a bit predictable but alas that is perhaps we have gotten so attached to the story and the characters portrayed.

Well done and thankyou for the trip.

The Mann
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Pimp story

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 3


I thought there would never be a part 3.
And now, improved parts one and two also!
I wondered what was going to happen to the rest of the soda.
Hopefully part 4 will not take another 4 years!

How conveinent that Miyuki and Chris are magicly reduced to 'huge' rather than the 'impossible' and 'f***ing impossible' they used to be.

Maybe Rose has a magical 'reduce to huge' power. She may have to use it again. And again. And again.

PS: A minor typo servived all the rewrites:

But Miyuki's own chest was well beyond anything humanly - or surgically - possible! She wouldn't just draw attention - she draw an entire crown! And how was she going to fit these behind the wheel of her Civic?

'She draw an entire crown!'??

Or is the author typing in her accent? LOL!

Pinto Bean
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 3

A sold extention of a golden oldie. I'm a sucker for any story with illustrations, especially high quality ones.

Benji Dude
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

A great trilogy even if it did take some time to complete and excellent illustrations as well. Gold.

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