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The Overflowing Bra

Steve Palmer
The Man Who Loved Big Breasts
Sequel to Blind Date. The daughers are all grown up now!
Average Scores:

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Hey you should really write some more stories.
You are a very talented man.I am just looking forward to you next work
of art. (maybe some illustrations would make it THE BEST OF THE BEST)

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Again, I am amazed at how well-written BE stories are capable of being. This story in particular shows that erotic literature doesn't need to restrain itself to pointless sexual romps, rather it shows that while this type of writing is not so generally accepted in today's world, it can still engross a reader in a fantastic and creative alternate reality equal to and surpassing the worlds created by Dickens, Twain, and others. If ever there is a Pulitzer Prize pertaining entirely to BE stories, Palmer shall surely obtain it, for his creative vision not only sparks arousal, but pure reading enjoyment as well.

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

Very, very good story. Can you imagine having not one, but three incredibly endowed women, all wanting to have sex with you? That alone could be just a mind bogglingly addictive fantasy!

Pinto Bean
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

This is one of the most competent pieces of writing I've run across on this site in a very long time. The dialog was exceptionally well crafted and the characters well... uh... fleshed-out. :) While it didn't have much BE in it, it was still a lot of fun to read for it's sheer quality and romantic spirit. Great work.

Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Always good to have a classic writer return; once again good work. :)

What would have made it complete to me would have been a return of Paul Forrest on illustrations, but then you can't please everyone. ;P

Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

All the attention on breasts in the story makes up for the low BE content. I did expect a busty roommate, from the earlier hints, but when the fact of a third identical sister was revealed it was quite overwhelming. Well done. This story seem to me to BE a great beginning, meaning that I would really like to read sequels to this story!

Overall= 5, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

The other sisters could have used some development, character and BE-wise. The ending seemed kind of abrupt. I really REALLY liked this story, the way you showed the love that was growing between them, how he wasn't shallow, how she wasn't just on the rebound, all well done. I guess my real criticsm is the story felt like "two love interest and her two clones, who will soon not have as big breast as her." Which, I can live with, because I loved the story.

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

This is an excellent continuation of the original Blind Date (I got the printed copy back in 1997)

Benji Dude
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

Although I haven't read the original I still found this story exceptionally enjoyable and griping. It's a story every writer should read so they know how to make a good story and characters.

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