The 5 part of the series.
Rayuen finally finds the one he is looking for, but so does Axetara, who will win the battle for control of the world?
Average Scores:
- Overall: 1.00
- BE: 2.00
- Characters: 4.00
- Technical: 4.00
mrletters
Overall= 1, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Story just rambled on endlessly. I found myself terribly unfulfilled at the end.
"I can't believe I read the whole thing"
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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