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Inflatable Andrea invites a friend over for a "big" surprise!
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.00
- BE: 2.50
- Characters: 2.25
- Technical: 3.75
MrHHH
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 4
This is a story? Well, I suppose you didn't spell any of the words wrong.
Cmdr_Mark
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 4
Not a bad story, and if you continue this by adding, say, a red head to the mix in the third chapter, it would be one of my favorite series.
Juke-Box
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 3
Very poor story, likeability zero. Inflation through air pump???
You can do better.
Acheron52
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Wierd but simple, straighforward story about blowing people up. Hard to say what in particular I like about it, but it just hits my fetish right, I guess. More!
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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