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Immortal Chronicles part I - The Three Friends
First story of a series where it's told the experiences of an Immortal with big breasts and breast growth throught his existance. Here, the Immortal meets a busty girl at a bar who will give him a great experience with her other girl friends.
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Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 5

Pretty short.
Interesting premise, but not much more.

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