The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Fluffy Duffy and the Devonshire Affair
Fluffy is a tomboy whose burgeoning breasts make a deep impression on the dad of her friend-next-door.

The zip contains a folder with all ten parts of the story and the background image file. Sorry the pages are not linked to one another.

Average Scores:

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

I've been waiting for this story to be reposted! I first read it back when was in R&D and enjoyed it then; you have some of the best character descriptions I've seen. Good stuff!

The Toymaker
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

I've only made it through part 4, but I wanted to say something, strike while the iron was hot, etc. I've always liked Axolotl's work, and I'd never seen this one before. It's a surprisingly weighty piece of fiction, and rather rewarding for all its heft- even the notable abscence of Ms. Twizzell is well-presented. Please keep up the great work.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Great Story, very much enjoyed it

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Overall, I greatly enjoyed the story. I would have liked, however, more by the way of an ending. Maybe more about how Fluffy had to deal everyday with her new "burdens."

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I really enjoyed this story a lot. I've read a lot on here, and this is by far my favorite. Great job. I'd love to see any other stories you've written.

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