The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Angel Connors of Gravid Glen #2
Further adventures of Angel Connors
Average Scores:

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

Awesome continuation. Nice to see Angel and her story get bigger and better!

Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

Very nice to see the Angel Connors story continued finally. Keep up the good work and we hope to see the story continue until she delivers.

Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Always happy to read anything from Rivan51. Well developed characters and lots of variety. (No pun intended)

Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

Quality of the story is good, but somehow it seems to have gone more into indulgence and less of the plot. Yes, I like/love/fantasize/lust for BE....but I like plot with my story, too.

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Yahoo, pregnancy!

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