The first of the tale of Angel Connors of Gravid Glen
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.50
- BE: 4.17
- Characters: 4.17
- Technical: 3.83
Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Great intro. Especially enjoyed the characters. Angel and Ravin are both very real and easily likeable, for both their personalities and how BIG they are. too bad Ravin isn't in the second chapter...
Grey Deth
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
I liked it ALOT! You've set up an interesting environment and you obviously like your women big, big breasted that is! I especially like how they are more sensual (i.e. very hot and hot for each other). I haven't read the 2nd chapter but I can't wait. I hope you keep writing and I look forward to more of your work. Wondering if there is something in the water up there!
solvegas
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I liked both stories . I want to read when she finally gives birth . I hope she gets really huge . Give us more !
Spoon
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Silussa
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Interesting start; lays the groundwork for a surprise somewhere down the road.
The Toymaker
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
The characters are very sexy, for myself, I'd prefer more on their growth/size than how hot they get for each other- but that's just me. On the whole, an enjoyable read. I'm off to Chapter 2.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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