richardosteele@hotmail.com
Our hero, hung-like-a-horse high school senior Jeff Weld meets stunning, sensationally stacked heroine Angelica Gonzales. It is love at first sight and the couple become an instant item. But what about Mama, the gigantic-breasted, desperate-for-loving Mrs Gonzales? Another HUGE Richard O Steele story!
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.89
- BE: 3.22
- Characters: 3.89
- Technical: 4.33
Reed
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Much More Thank I Expected. Bravo, Steele. You are a master story teller.
Alfonzo51
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Leviathan17In
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Awesome story, one of the highest quality I've seen. I would have loved the male character to be ever more massive tho, given the size of the girl. His erect size would have been perfect as his flaccid size (14").
jat470
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Other than the word "Golly!" showing up enough times to grate the nerves just a little, it's another well-written and entertaining piece of fiction. I still would like to see you experiment with the types of characters you use in your stories, though.
x
Overall= 3, BE= 1, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Too long, and not enough BE. Very well written though.
Clownboat
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 4
The male protaganists in ROS's stories always seem to be complete and total a-holes who only use women and don't have any adversity to deal with at all. Now I know this is an erotic story but its just so distracting when your mind is screaming "wow he doesnt deserve her at all" constantly.
andrat2000
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
This I call a novel.
Exactly the length I like. Not one of the castrated ones at long last. Cantilevered as it should be. Wow!
The Angelica and Jeff's thoughts intercepting the story very much destroyed the fluently reading of the story.
bye andrat2000
tljlf
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Great storie as always.. buy maybe a little more BE explicit would be grate.. maybe dauther beats MOM´s... .)
ALWAYS WAITING FOR YOUR JOBS...
M
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Very nice, if a bit long.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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